Oink-Moo's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[His Big Man]

Pretty good. Your technique could use some softening I think, since the colors, lines and shading all seem VERY stark and aggressive, which doesn't seem to be in line with the vibe of the content exactly.

But gee, 28 ratings and only 1.43? Could it be due to the gay or the largeness of the man I wonder? Maybe both. People can be petty and I do not think this deserves quite that low a rating, especially with how highly some of the awful female/lesbian drawings are rated. It's not perfect, just know it's not THAT bad. ;)

Keep up the good work, and remember the softening. Good luck.

[You would defy nature for me?]

Woowww... this is really pretty breathtaking. I love how people who do Adventure Time fanart (even the likes of rule34 fanart) always seem to manage to put out such nice artwork.

When I first looked at I just thought, "Gee, what a really beautiful drawing," and then I realized what it was and I was blown away. Great work indeed.

[Vader on a summer's day]

I love that you painted this.

[Axolotl Waters]

This is just beautiful. Nothing else to add, I was in love with it every step of the way as I scrolled down. :) +Fave.

[Mystic girl]

That's really cute, I like it a lot. :) Not really anything to say about it, just that it's a lovely painting.

Museismymuse responds:

Thank you very much! :)

[Karaba and Cacus]

The detail is great, u seem to be pretty confident with character design. I only really have one critique but it's a big one for this picture: try to find a way to up the contrast and establish borders between the characters and all their different parts. The drawing looks good, but it is a little hard to sort out just because the general darkness/lightness is pretty much the same across the page. The characters and their parts blend into one another a bit too much and looking at the style I didn't assume this was a technical intention, though I guess who am I to judge?

If you do want to do that, you might try experimenting with varying line widths, such as making the lines slightly thicker around the characters themselves so you can tell clearly where each one ends and begins. Also try making your shadows a little darker or trying the 3 shade anime style shadowing instead of the only 2-shade that you seem to have here. There's nothing wrogn with 2-shade, but it can have an effect of giving everything the same depth and darkness value sometimes which may be problematic.

And of course, if none of this is any interest to you then forget it all and do what you like. Just offering some constructive feedback for a very good drawing. :) Apart from all that, again your attention to detail is excellent and your fur, hair and wrinkles are quite good. I myself despise anything having to do with cloth physics, so good on ya. Lol. Keep up the great work!

Sandragon responds:

we dont have the same taste of art at all ..im more into fantasy creepy stuff and you just draw humans . So i guess its could be a problem if ours taste is far away from eachother. I could said a lots of think that i dont like in your stuff but its none of my busyness you do what you love and that what matter.

[Hello miss]

Wow, that just looks great. I love pen work like this and you pulled it off really nicely. Did you do a light pencil sketch first or just go at it with the pen? Either way, keep up the excellent work. :D

Sevens responds:

why thank you :) I went straight with ballpoint pen, no practice lines

[Green City concept]

I love the concept, and you did a great job rendering it in pen like this. I'd love to see it cleaned up and refined. :)

Sevens responds:

it is a finished piece luv, sometimes you have to leave things the way they are... too much or too little would really take away from character, perfect isn't always the goal. but thank you, maybe i will color it and you can see since you and I am sure a few others would like to see too. :)

[Dying the American Dream]

I check this picture out every now and then when looking through my favorites as I try to find inspiration. After so many months since I first found it, I still have such a ladyboner for this picture. The Noose for a tie really is the icing on the cake, and all of the shapes and details are excellent and nothing feels forced or pretentious.

Just thought I'd drop in months after submission and give you another "WOW AWESOME 5/5 BRO!" :) Have a great day.

[Going Home]

Beautiful, as always. :)

It sort of has a feel like a Tarot card, sort of where the vibe and emotion is more important than the literal imagery or something. (I also really liked FelixArk's interpretation, it was similar to mine hehe.) It gives me this sense of melancholy and longing, but also a cold happiness. Like better things await the girl in the picture, though what it may be is unknown to her. Great work, I love it.