Oink-Moo's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alacrity AIR SPLITS]

Very very nice, I'll start with my few complaints because they are rather trifling and more of personal preference than real critique. The perspective, while incredible and dynamic, does seem a little wonky and makes her right leg look veeerry long. Also, her ribs/abs area seems just a bit overly muscular, but like I said that's just a personal opinion and not critique.

I love the colors and shading, love the quality of the line art, it makes me feel like this was beautiful even just as a sketch. Your light source also looks really good, which is something that I seem to have a tough time with. I also, like others here, really like the pose and the perspective. She looks tough, sexy, spry, and she has lovely little tits. (Thanks for avoiding the "tried and true" huge boobs on an athletic character formula. While it can look nice, this is much more convincing and appealing.)

Anyway, it's excellent and do keep up the good work. :)

[Unleashed]

I like the colors a lot, they work together very nicely, and the content is definitely interesting. I didn't feel like it was really dynamic enough though -- no part of it really "pops" for me -- there's no distinct sense of action or motion and it seems to rely a bit on filters in lieu of actual detail. It's going in the right direction and certainly seems creative, it just could use a little more attention to detail. :)

Hope you could find some useful critique in there. Keep up the nice work.

SplendidDevil responds:

Thanks, I do appreciate the crit. This piece is actually just a test/prototype, the final piece is currently being tended to.

[Inkd]

I love it! !it's so simple with only the two colors, and the idea is just so cute. There's not really anything else for me to say about it because it's just perfect. 5/5! :)

juturnal responds:

Thanks Oink-Moo!

[Jaws are overrated]

Happy birthday lol.

Cool drawing, I always find myself impressed by things with fantastical structures like this attractive gentleman here. Very creative.

The only real drawback is that the background is a bit boring and unadorned, it makes the character seem out of place. It very much makes the background feel like an overt afterthought to avoid the dreaded white space.

Other than that, awesome! Keep it up.

Jaona responds:

Thanks!
That's exactly what it is for actually...I'm probably going to draw a proper background soon.

[Cluttered]

Love it.

[Dead Head]

Nice. :) Clean up the style a bit, it's a little chunky and pixelated looking or something. Maybe make it more dynamic by adding some sort of background and some shadows, even if it's only a second darker tone.

Other than that looks great!

Bugdog001 responds:

Yeah, it looks that way because I drew it on paper first, scanned it, contrasted it, colored it, and then saved it as a .gif. It was originally meant for a clothing line I had, that's why there's no bg :)

[Don't Hit Your Wife]

Hahaha that sucks! xD I laughed so hard. I love your toons. Keep up the awesome work.

ToonHole responds:

Thanks! If you keep lookin at 'em, I'll keep makin' em

[f*ck]

Quite cool, i like the sketchy style.

Apply these radical styles to your own original subject matter and you'll be in the art portal before you even know it.

[suitstuck]

Super cool man. I love the faces, and the proportions are excellent. These guys have a lot of character. :) Please keep making awesomeness like this.

[Billy]

Strange, ugly, and slightly spooky... perfect.

I like your art quite a lot, though I think this one is my favorite. Very nice, I'm eager to see how your style and skill develop. Keep up the good work. :)